Peer Review - Lo Min Ming

Layout
The site template is well designed and very polished.  Thus, it should attract and keep visitors on the site.  The navigation system is intuitive and convenient.  Within the Happenings page, a text listing of events underneath graphical views could be helpful to a visitor.

School – Level 0
I really liked the way you enlarged and changed color of keywords in the Intro page.  This will be beneficial for those who come to your website looking for a specific topic that would be covered by level 0, but do not wish to read through all the content.  

Suggestions:
I think it might be helpful to readers if you address the sidebar topics within the body paragraphs of the landing page for Level 0.  Otherwise, a reader in a hurry might miss the links and continue on to the other links in the main navigation bar.  In fact, you might want to compose an imagemap similar to that of the slide in your PowerPoint where the Stanford student is surrounded by a bunch of boxes, each containing link. Also, you may want to include a link to the Introduction page in the sidebar navigation for the Level 0 section.

Quick notes:

  • I think you meant to say “goal of earning as much money as possible” instead of “goal of learning as much money as possible” in the initiative paragraph.
  • Unless I am mistaken, you probably meant to have something after “Most business are established to help a piece of” in the Problem Statement section under Brainstorming Ideas. Also, you should fix the typo in the first line of that same section.

About SSS
The section is very informative.  I was wondering at the same time whether it would be a good idea to split the content in the About page into several pages or have a Table of Contents at the top of that page.  Also, you may want to include a link to the main About page in the sidebar navigation for the About SSS section.

Other Suggestions
It might be worthwhile creating a portion of the website dedicated to the assignments at least for the duration of the quarter.

Overall Comments
I am extremely impressed by your work thus far.  The site is both very enlightening and inspiring.  I will definitely keep a watch on this site in the future as I am really interested in seeing how it turns out. Thank you for creating this project and all the best
with your work!

Last Updated: 16 May 2008